commit 22945a78ce07d28963ea7425402c20dd1e5e9f67
parent 895eba1bdaffd4818d3b0baec3f9f02ddf5621ca
Author: Jaromil <jaromil@dyne.org>
Date: Tue, 23 Sep 2014 12:06:23 +0200
Merge pull request #143 from myqlarson/patch-1
Reviewed README.md for proper English
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| M | README.md | | | 42 | +++++++++++++++++++++--------------------- |
1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
@@ -21,45 +21,45 @@ Updates on website: http://dyne.org/software/tomb
Get the stable .tar.gz signed release for production use!
Download it from https://files.dyne.org/tomb
-# What is Tomb, the crypto undertaker
+# What is Tomb, the crypto undertaker?
Tomb aims to be a free and open source system for easy encryption and
backup of personal files, written in code that is easy to review and
links shared GNU/Linux components.
-At present time, Tomb consists of a simple shell script (Zsh) using
+At present, Tomb consists of a simple shell script (Zsh) using
standard filesystem tools (GNU) and the cryptographic API of the Linux
kernel (cryptsetup and LUKS). Tomb can also produce machine parsable
output to facilitate its use inside graphical applications.
-# How does it works
+# How does it work?
For the instructions on how to get started using Tomb, see [INSTALL](INSTALL.md).
-This tool can be used to dig .tomb files (Luks volumes), forge keys
+This tool can be used to dig .tomb files (LUKS volumes), forge keys
protected by a password (GnuPG symmetric encryption) and use the keys
to lock the tombs. Tombs are like single files whose contents are
-unaccessible in absence of the key they were locked with and its
+inaccessible in the absence of the key they were locked with and its
password.
-Once open the tombs are just like normal folders and can contain
+Once open, the tombs are just like normal folders and can contain
different files, plus they offer advanced functionalities like bind
and execution hooks and fast search, or they can be slammed close even
-if busy. Keys can be stored on separate media like USB sticks, NFC or
+if busy. Keys can be stored on separate media like USB sticks, NFC, or
bluetooth devices to make the transport of data safer: one always
needs both the tomb and the key, plus its password, to access it.
The tomb script takes care of several details to improve the security
-of tombs in every day usage: adopting pinentry for passwords,
+of tombs in everyday usage: adopting PIN entry for passwords,
facilitating the storage of backup keys using image steganography,
listing open tombs and selectively closing them, warning the user
about their size and last time they were used, etc.
# How secure is this?
-Death is the only sure thing in life. Said that, Tomb is a pretty
-secure tool especially because it keeps minimal, its source is always
-open and its code is easy to review with a bit of shell script
+Death is the only sure thing in life. That said, Tomb is a pretty
+secure tool especially because it is kept minimal, its source is always
+open, and its code is easy to review with a bit of shell script
knowledge.
All encryption tools being used in Tomb are included as default in
@@ -76,13 +76,13 @@ Tomb is an evolution of the 'mknest' tool developed for the dyne:bolic
GNU/Linux distribution, which is used by its 'nesting' mechanism to
encrypt the Home directory of users, a system implemented already in
2001. Since then, the same shell routines kept being maintained and in
-2007 they were adapted to work on various other GNU/Linux distributions.
+2007, they were adapted to work on various other GNU/Linux distributions.
-As of today, Tomb is a well stable tool also used in mission critical
-situations by a number of activists in endangered zones. It has been
+As of today, Tomb is a very stable tool also used in mission critical
+situations by a number of activists in dangerous zones. It has been
reviewed by forensics analysts and it can be considered to be safe for
-military grade use, where the integrity of informations stored depend
-from the user's behaviour and the strenght of a standard AES-256
+military grade use where the integrity of information stored depends on
+the user's behaviour and the strength of a standard AES-256
(XTS plain) encryption algorithm.
# Use stable releases in production
@@ -90,12 +90,12 @@ from the user's behaviour and the strenght of a standard AES-256
Anyone planning to use Tomb to store and access secrets should not use
the latest development version in Git, but use instead the .tar.gz
release on https://files.dyne.org/tomb . The stable version will
-always insure backward compatibility with older tombs: we make sure it
+always ensure backward compatibility with older tombs: we make sure it
creates sane tombs and keys by running various tests before releasing
it. The development version in Git might introduce sudden bugs and is
-not granted to produce backward or forward compatible tombs and keys.
+not guaranteed to produce backward- or forward-compatible tombs and keys.
Only developers and testers should use the Git version to report bugs,
-test new features and develop patches.
+test new features, and develop patches.
So be warned: do not use the latest Git version in production
environments, but use a stable release versioned and packed as
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ Translations are also needed: they can be contributed via this website
https://poeditor.com/join/project?hash=33bdefea2e46b26f512a0caae55fbbb5
or simply sending the .po file. Start from `extras/po/tomb.pot`.
-Code is pretty short and readable: start looking around it and the
-materials found in doc/ which are good pointers at security measures
+The code is pretty short and readable: start looking around and the
+materials found in `doc/` which are good pointers at security measures
to be further implemented.
For the bleeding edge visit https://github.com/dyne/Tomb
