commit 0ca5fb5e611952e389634298437a65ca7a67fd09
parent e29b29d7e52fdfe95b49a40efa18de1c4c100daf
Author: parazyd <parazyd@dyne.org>
Date: Sun, 27 Jan 2019 17:47:15 +0100
Redact index text.
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2 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
diff --git a/templates/contact.html b/templates/contact.html
@@ -40,7 +40,8 @@
<p>Diaspora Diaries is free software! It is licensed with <a
href="https://www.gnu.org/licenses/agpl-3.0">GNU Affero General
Public License v3</a> and the source code can be found on <a
- href="https://github.com/parazyd/diasporadiaries">Github</a>.
+ href="https://github.com/parazyd/diasporadiaries">Github</a>.<br>
+ Contributions are more than welcome!
</main>
diff --git a/templates/index.html b/templates/index.html
@@ -10,16 +10,19 @@
<hr>
<p>This is a place where everyone that has an experience with living abroad
- can write down their story.</p>
+ can write down their story.<br>
+ (City changers are also welcome)</p>
<p class="lead">You can use your knowledge and the situations you have gone
through to help someone with similar problems, everyday frustrations or just
- make them feel less alone. You can also write about the reasons and
- background of your migration. After all, we are all just human beings in a
- search for peace and happiness.</p>
+ make them feel less alone.</p>
- <p class="lead">Let your fellow humans know that they are surrounded with
- others of their kind. Make them feel less scared and lonely.</p>
+ <p class="lead">You can write about the reasons and background of your
+ migration. After all, we are all just human beings in a search for peace and
+ happiness.</p>
+
+ <p class="lead">Let your fellow humans know they are surrounded with others
+ of their kind. Make them feel less scared and lonely.</p>
<p class="text-center">
<a href="/write" class="btn btn-lg btn-secondary">GO AND WRITE DOWN YOUR
@@ -30,27 +33,29 @@
<label for="burger-check" class="burger">Read more...</label>
<div class="readmore">
- <p class="lead">In this day and age, there are a lot of people migrating
- in a search for a better life. People are changing towns, cities, states
- and even continents in their quest for a better surroundings. They are
- searching for a place where they can feel more at ease, chase their dreams
- or simply live their life.</p>
+ <p class="lead">Nowadays, there are a lot of people migrating in a search
+ for a better life. People are changing towns, cities, states and even
+ continents in their quest for better surroundings. They are searching for
+ a place where they can feel more at ease, chase their dreams or simply
+ live their life.</p>
<p class="lead">Moving to a place different from the one you were born in,
- accustomed to and familiar with is often a difficult and long process that
- can be filled with a lot of misunderstandings and dead ends leading to
- frustration and overwhelming feeling of loneliness.</p>
+ accustomed to and familiar with is often a difficult and long process.
+ Unique experience that can be filled with a lot of misunderstandings and
+ dead ends, all of which lead to frustration and overwhelming feeling of
+ loneliness.</p>
- <p class="lead">It is hard to walk through foreign streets, filled with
+ <p class="lead">It is hard to walk through unknown streets filled with
busy unfamiliar faces, signs, foreign languages, different climate and
culture trying to get your foot in the door and organize your new life.
- Every community has its way of doing things, very often not so clearly
- explained. It is natural to feel lost and confused.</p>
-
- <p class="lead">Person changing it’s environment has a fresh and highly
- perceptive regard towards new culture and corresponding customs. They can
- spot a bizarre rule of conduct from miles ahead. It is strange, it is
- funny, it is useful.</p>
+ Every community has its way of doing things, frequently, not so clearly
+ explained. It is natural to feel lost and confused.</p>
+
+ <p class="lead">Very often a person changing it’s environment has a fresh
+ and highly perceptive regard towards new culture and corresponding
+ customs. They can spot a bizarre rule of conduct from miles ahead.
+ Everyone of us has a story to tell, advise to give and experience to
+ share. No one knows who you can help or amuse with your anecdotes.</p>
</div>
<hr>
